blog 32

This morning I was finally able to finish my paper.  I still need to edit it but at least all the writing is done.  I think I did a pretty good job on it.  When I read through it the first time it all flowed together pretty well.  I'm still not sure though how much detail I need to have about the background of Dollhouse and how it works.  I have a few sentences but I think I might need to add a few more.  I will eventually have to add a lot more to each paragraph since its only 5 pages.  It would also be helpful if I can find additional examples of how my topic relates to the real world.  That will probably be easier to make my paper longer that way than just trying to add more sentences to the paragraphs I already have.  I don’t know what else I would connect it to though or even what more I could add to the paragraphs I already have.  I could go to the writing center and see if they have any ideas.  I should go there next weekend and see.  The extra credit I would be getting by going would be helpful too.  I also need to figure out if the citation that EbscoHost has is correct.  If it is that would be really helpful since all I have to do is copy and paste it.